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Old 01-28-06, 01:38 AM   #7
Sean Gunner
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If fisto doesn't post a real punch, then my vote goes to Weak. Wording was bad, work on getting more to the point.

I'll throw a fisto your face, nabisco got nothing on me,
They just played....just like yours from last week.

Like that, unneeded wording makes the flow worse, and also makes the bar seem stretched. Concept was bad though, the flip was bad.

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