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Old 05-12-04, 02:17 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by Blacksmith
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.

Is the only line that really stood out inya verse. Had some good ones but this was the best...

Casual, some of what you said was cool, I dont know if it was your format but it was hard to read.. no punches really stood out tho...
good battle

Ima have to go with Blacksmith on this one...

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