Voted For: J DOT
j- dOT
1RST BAR - ICU ISN'T DEADLY, THEY SAVE LIVES, THAT PUNCH DIDN'T MAKE SENSE..
2ND BAR - NO PUNCH, JUST FILLER
3RD BAR - AGAIN, MOSTLY FILLER, BASIC WORDPLAY AND A STRETCHED LINE..
4TH BAR - LAME, STRETCHED LINE AGAIN ALSO..
5TH BAR - PUT A HOLE IN HIS BIKE? THAT WASN'T A PUNCHLINE..
6TH - BASIC AND PLAYED OUT SIMILIE AND BASIC WORDPLAY..
7TH BAR - THAT WAS JUST WHACK DUDE.. MIND SPINNIN LIKE SPREWELLS?
8TH BAR - DISSAPOINTING LAST BAR ALSO,
OVERALL I GIVE YOU 4/10, YOU LACKED SERIOUSLY IN WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES, YOU NEED TO ELEVATE..
G
i'M NOT GONNA GO BAR FOR BAR, BUT YOU HAD SOME REALLY GOOD WORDPLAY, NICE MULTIE SYLLABIC RHYMES, LIKE HOT TAMATO, ROT POTATO.. AND YOUR PUNCHES GOT MY ATTENTION AND WERE LESS PLAYED, THEY STUC.K.. PERSONALS HIT ALSO, LIKE THE KING OF SAC THING, SO YOU GET MY VOTE..
YO, HIT UP THIS BATTLE CUZ, THANX.
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