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Old 05-09-05, 07:05 PM   #10
diman
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re-verb
you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
not a good start.
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
aight, its pickin up.
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
decently wack.
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
haha.
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
god no.

*verse was half and half, 50%
of your verse was decent. and
50% of your verse was decenly
wack, like ive already said. things
will hopefully pick up for you.

hotshh

I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
decent open
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
what haha?
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
haha.
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
thats my crew, but hey...still a good bar.
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
decent.
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship
haha, real good finish.

*the verse was hot, punches were
good, fillers were minimul. the flow was
real hot.. overrall, shit was fire.


vote: hotshh!

verses were good, good luck to both.

-eph
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