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Old 06-18-04, 08:37 AM   #10
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check It...

Shadows Edge: 6/10
You Had A Nice Topical Format You Choose....But You Lacked Emotion...Had High Vocab, Word Play Alright....Your Flow Was Nice Threwout...Story Lead Threw A Bit..But Nice Drop.

The Great Harold: 7/10
I Felt Your Spit More Due To The Emotion You Brought Forth In Your Writting. Your Flow Was Good...Shadows Beat You With Vocab and Word Usuage...But This Is Topical and Emotion Threw Words Is What Winz.

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