Shadow's Edge- didnt really feel that story much......to me it lacked in emotion
but the vocab and word usage were nice....your overall verse was good...and
you had a good structure...imagery was nice too.....

overall: 8.0/10

Great Harold:your verse was nice.....i think shadow beat you in vocab..but that was it
your verse had great imagery and had more emtion in it.....it kept me hooked

This sadness turns to rage, the rage becomes hate,
I clutch the gun near my chest, which decides this bastard’s fate.

nice imagery

overall: 9/10

vote: TGH