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Old 02-07-04, 05:35 AM   #12
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openers- lyricali had an ok start but the second line got choppy, too many sylables
ill.'s starter had me rollin', it also read nicely.

wordplay- niether really had any

vocab-ill. was off and on with his use of big words, but it worked well in his verse.
lyricali's verse was a little more complex, and consistent with his word usage.

punches-lyricali had three punches by my count..and two of those were weak,and/or played.
ill. overwhelmed lyricali with his punches.

personals-ill. was the only one that had andy,,but the one he did have was a good one.

structure-lyricali was the only one that had equal bars....

closers-lyricali had a "typical closer" is was a funny but it didn't hit real hard.
ill..had a nice closer, although the shole autograph your corpse thing has been done to death..ha..it hit real; hard..


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