Switched ya style up a bit in here, kept away from the big vocab and focussed on the pure emotion in this one! I love how you divided it into different aspects of life and as a conclusion posed the rhetorical question "isn't all life good?". Had insightful lines with wisdom in them, flow was overall good, emotion was strongest part of it. Be feeling this piece for sure, easy to read, deep and inspiring stuff man!

Keep it up

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