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I used this beat before...I liked it
ur flow is good here...but dub more of the rhyming words or phrases to increase your presence
delivery is adequate for this type of track, but you could have been more expressive
lyrics are good....could benefit from some concrete imagery (more metas/creative similies, etc)
I liked this...the beat had alot to do with that, but you delivered a presentable track.
good 1
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