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Old 01-23-06, 09:28 PM   #4
Tha Q.
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I used this beat before...I liked it



ur flow is good here...but dub more of the rhyming words or phrases to increase your presence


delivery is adequate for this type of track, but you could have been more expressive

lyrics are good....could benefit from some concrete imagery (more metas/creative similies, etc)


I liked this...the beat had alot to do with that, but you delivered a presentable track.


good 1
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