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Old 01-16-05, 06:49 AM   #14
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Voted For: Butters

nice verse butters i really enjoyed reading it and you used some complexed vocabulary in your verse which was good... both ya'll lacked multies...

BUTTERS...

Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec...
Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text...
nice opener and good punch... 7/10
Check yaself brother..cos you bout to be dropped, & dismembered...
Lopsided battle...ill leave fatal in the shade..more than his avys rendered...
lol this punch was good a play off his avy 8/10
Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick...
You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique...
another good punch 7/10
I stand firm, throw ya punch's at me kid...cos they just get deflected...
But fatal claimed he was ill....cos he got a lifetime prescription of anti-septics...
ill(anticeptics) nice well thought of... 8/10
Ill put holes in your verse, leaving it looking like a site under construction...
Many words can describe you, like "You suck", like Gary coleman & Liposuction...
hahaha this had me rolling... likeng the gary coleman line... 9/10

overall i thought your verse was really good to read i didnt get bored of reading it... 8.2/10

FATAL...

Listen lil nigga u cood catch 2 thru ya vest........
U just a fan wit ma name tattooed on ya chest.........
weak opener... weak punch. 5/10
Im truly da best, u a pup tonite......
N wit a name like Butters u must be white..........
^ whats wrong with being white??? 4/10
Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help.........
N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............
another weak punch... 4/10
Seriously kid ya nutz, i'll leave ya throat cut.........
Take away the e.r.s in ya name cuz nigga u butt....
lol name play spsoe it will do...6/10
I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done....
U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1.......
weak closure... 4/10

ryt overall i thought your verse was too simple your lines were too short and you lacked some hard punches... 5.4/10

v/ butters....

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