I have a lot to learn...
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
IP:
A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz,
good flow, good punch, nice wordplay.
You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid
& it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet,
Decent punch.. this new battle system kinda fucked ya up.. cos it dont show sigs
DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully
I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly,
wierd rhyme... ok punch
Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com
Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none,
first line was original... i liked it
'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks
W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block,
decent closer
over: pretty good verse... was feelin most of ya punches... aight flow
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