R-Rated: Voice/Music was alright, maybe lower music down a bit, eh? Then it woulid be perfect. Not many ill lyrics that I heard, "semen" line may have been good, but I'm not sure what all you said, so ces't la vie. You sped up and slowed down to much. Try to avoid that next time, makes you sound hurried, then like it's realising what you're doing.
Btw, "Fucking whore" at the end was hilarious :-P

Phenom: Turn music down. Everyone has a problem with music being up too much, or not enough :-P . Uh, I loved line about "no hypen no comma" Wasn't best thing ever, but it hit me :-P Make it more clear, overall you rode the beat really well, and flow was awesome so was delivery. So good job

After hearing Phenom's drop, I vote for him. Good thing I got a chance to listen to it, eh? :-P

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