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Old 03-05-09, 05:03 PM   #10
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monkey see, monkey do, but u can't link up with g's,
coz while im swingin with ma fists, ur jus swingin from the trees,
meh it was ok but not hard


see thos toos dat will fire,
doggy will get it though cause like a hollywood video I'll leave evos hood n grill wired/
yea your structure is awful your punch is stretched as fuck and your set up is 6 words that don't make sence, punch was lame too
you don't load n pop those my brother
theres no weapons on dogs wrist cause he can't render some hotness like his photoshop promo cover/
again your set up is a few words and your punch is a line and a half......and again weak

switch your style next week

i'd say your a bum rapper, man ur slayin those raps,
coz ya lines done make sense/cents like american tramps,
you don't have to put cents and sence in there we can figure it out it killed youy line and you could have thought of a lot better things to compare it to then a american tramp......after all its generic as fuck and been done so many times



weak battle

vote ec for atleast haveing structure
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