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Old 09-25-03, 04:25 PM   #14
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Content - a great verse, i mean like woah! that was dope, great word choice, the structure made it a little hard for me to grasp at first, i read over maybe three times to make sure i took it all in, but yeah, your imagery / writers voice / emotion are what summed this up best, you came dope here, i loved this section:
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me being a pleasent phesants tryin to dream
wells irrevelant...
no scapegoat needed ive gave up on
your existance...
some followed but on the other hand
many didnt listen...


Necromancer - i dunno about the whole `king kong`theory, but again, a well written verse, a contrasting take on the topic in my opinion, but equally good writers voice, really intense and imagery were its strongest points, i liked both verses but only one can win and to me, Content portraid the topic better, so he gets my vote. Nice job theough Necro, you did well for sure.

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