This Was Alright But It Could Have Been Alot Better

Flow Got Off A Lil In The Middle, Try To Use Some Multis It Really Helps Your Flow Alot

Emotion Was Ight But You Could Have Gone In Deeper And Made This Alot Better

Vocab Real Basic But I Dont Care About That, To Me Vocab Really Has Nothing To Do With Rappin Skill Just Casue You Can Say Big Words And Spell Them Doesnt Mean Your A Good Writer Or Rapper

Overall This Was To Basic I Mean Look At The Words That Your Rhyme Real Basic Shit, If Your Structure And Rhymin Is Basic You Got To Have Alot Of Emotion In It And Tell A Story Of Somesort, Or Just Throw In Big Words That No One Will Understand Then Everyone Will Love You Lol Just Joking Bout That Part
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Keep Writin I Know Your Just Learnin How To Write Topicals And Shit You Will Get Alot Better In A Short Time

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