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Old 01-02-04, 08:05 PM   #13
Soulfire
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This battle was pretty close but...

Ocanti: Your verse was nice. This is the best one of yours I've seen. Nice replies and nice metas. Decent flow. Your punches and wordplay could still be stronger, however.

Write Mind: Your verse was nice, but not that creative. Nice punches and okay flow, but you need better wordplay and find somethin' else to talk about. It was still good, though.
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