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Old 10-04-05, 12:51 PM   #58
Dervla
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Listening while typing-

Intro beat- I love the Multi Drums...and the piano following it up
Flow- Alright Nice, Multi flow's with wordplays, The "fax' Lines is good creative.
Voice- Damn!.....Your voice has changed...Before it sounded like some micky-mouse shit...but now...it's all gangstah and stuff lol.
Lyrics- Good shit, Like I said I'm liking the Wordplays and the ending part was Nice Loving the Multi'z...
Approach- It was Nice...


This was a decent Lil 1:00 Minute track, I wanted more your flow has improved, the lyrics are dope with wordplays...and your Voice gotten a upgrade lol ...Keep it up, it looks like you found your style...and I'm lovin it...peace.
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