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Old 05-22-06, 12:16 PM   #10
The Creator
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From: South Florida nugga'
Unhappy

IP:

Your Killin all these gangs......dont mean you fit in and shit
'n course you got all the gangsters on AIM....with your buddy list
Good punch...badly worded
^Is that your best?your in it deep,your cheap but dont need the bargin
Need tools,but ill rake this HOE,while he manages to give life to gardens
Afex
didn't get the life to gardens part but the rest was ok
^^^^Course a ghostwrighter,pfft,kid your light,'n MC glows bright
But only when I walk up on stage.........and rename the dike
Wak...both lines shouldn't be in there at all

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Originally Posted by Superintel
Lmao eyedentdy???hmm isnt his alias lightning?
Not sure if this was supposed to rhyme wit anything so thats a point off

"Philospher"?sure,in that sense call us the same,but ill come up better
'n you fucked up your name,when you think of the whether
didn't like it at all
Poor kid,I feel bad for this "dog" and fine four five seconds you were rich
Until your saw the Price of the Texas Double Wopper
.................................................. .............................'n nows a bitch
Extremely wak closer....the dog n bitch shit was wak and the lines had no flow..sorry...

MC Phil
The only way this guy arrive hard is riding dick during erection
He was refused breast milk but his dad cock fucked up affection
Liked 1st line...2nd line was wak
Fucking fagot he mark dudes like x-men so call him Mystique
speaking on alias wasn’t you the homo formally known as Ziq
ok line...should've had more creativity in it but it was ok...
U had a crew too but it got ghost so where did they all go
But heads up cuz
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Originally Posted by Valor
i beleive tim said he was out also
Doesn't really sound right when I read it but it was a good personal

Lenten Inc. his religious crew cuz to get wins he needs a ministry***
U should have spit from the end cuz that’s the only way u gonna finish me
ur best bar in this battle..should've had more like this...
Nigga u gets no love like faith evans…..Effexchon time up
So do something for yourself like mary….leave and stop crying…..nigga u dried up
ok closer...could've been better but u still got ur point across.


vote goes to MC Phil on this one but it was a wak battle on the real to me....u both could've came a lot harder on this one...good luck both of u though.
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Originally Posted by Jesus Christ
Damn son.......did I write that shit?