Young Blaze
Kids Like My Caddy Cuz He Holds My Stick AN Follows me Around U Agree
Plus He Could Be Caught In College Fires An Wouldn't Chatch Any Type Of Degree
^a lil too long...but punch was ite-6/10
Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign
^^I think I heard a line a lil similar to this somewhere before-4/10
Wit the Blade I'm Quick WIt the Slice Then TAke Yah Body an Leave It Iced
An yea u ROck It Playin Guitar Watchin THe punishment Scene In Passion Of Christ
^^didn't like this so much-3/10
I Swing Deep Wit Them Hatchets, When Creepin On Ur patchs
I COuld Teach U My Tactics, AN Still u Couldn't "Fire Back" Sleepin On Matches
^^OK...-7/10
Have U Slammed In Tables Leave u wit more Holes Than a Pack Of Bagels
.....................preparin an envelope ONly time 9Th Landed A label
^^plaaaayed.-3/10
U Gettin Stepped on Like some Walkways...U COnfused R u in A Maze???
Cuz Y's Like The Twin Towers it Takes More than One Firetruck To Stop A blaze*
^^your best punchline..-9/10

OK..I think some lines..like the guitar on was weak.You had some played ones too..like the bagel/label one..n the vet one.Some of your set-ups was "blah".Keep it relevant to the punch.

9th Degree
It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
^^good wordplay=7/10
Fuck all, I'll get simple 'cuz your name suggests a young age
I'll stoop to your level and spit fire, baby, while you just Young Blaze
^^2nd line was a lil too long to the first...wasn't feelin punch that much neither-5/10
One page, of my writtens can top your whole catalogue
Get swamped with so many votes against you, you'll barely get past the fog
^^OK....-6/10
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
^^wasn't likin it much...but ite....5/10
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion
^^Nice wordplay again-8/10

OK...I think you got this for being more consistant with your verse.Just more solid.Set-ups was relevant to punches as opposed to Young Blaze.I think the auntie-up n center wordplays got you this.

SO my votes goes to 9th for coming for consistant and creative.

Vote-9th Degree