Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign
I Swing Deep Wit Them Hatchets, When Creepin On Ur patchs
I COuld Teach U My Tactics, AN Still u Couldn't "Fire Back" Sleepin On Matches
vs
It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
One page, of my writtens can top your whole catalogue
Get swamped with so many votes against you, you'll barely get past the fog
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on

9th took this with some good wordplay and nice punches
blaze ya verse had potential, ya set ups and wording will make ya verses better
or worse