wow ...

this piece is great. i am in a lazy mood right now, and i had no problem reading your whole verse.

first off i love the way you ended each line, each rhyme for some reason just fit perfectly to me. Your imagery was on point..you really brought the senses to life with this piece...your vocabulary was good ..i dont think it plays a factor but it was very noticable. Emotion is something you definitley added..i feel you on that...just a well sounded topical...nothing to really knock you on man...keep this shit up..im loving your shit and cant wait for more.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME