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Old 01-05-05, 03:48 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by hotshh!
Like ya sig ya the King of the South!.the way ya going down unconscious
CUz all SPul pack is Weak 'punches' like a High School Prom Drink!
Weak rhyme....and played....3/10
U ' putting Mass on map? Nonsense!...Bolton get Bombed Quick
The last time you ' seen the hood '...was in front of ya Moms Whip!
Decent....4/10
..Smash your 'King' repeat chances like bats to Glass Ornaments....
So fuck 'Three days'..Your on 'Timeout' the rest of the Tournament!
....No...2/10
'Greed blind you' like mase in Kells eyes that made the Tour Dead..*
But if its the "money on ya mind" Ill make change out ya Fore head!
Nice....7/10
Look ya wasting ya words like Petty Arguments..So Why Speak?
See they got it confused..THIS is really ya 'Bye Week' (goodbye geek)!
This could've been much better....5/10
So "get a grip"..or 'post mittens'...More 'pussy' then most kittens..
Of Course his verse Lack "Soul"...What you expect? Its 'Ghost' Written!
Same as above....5/10
But no difference..this champ is trash be..Ass cheeks if U ask Me.
....Who couldnt 'blow up' with a Light match and a Gas Leak!!
Played like anus....2/10
They gonna have to stitch and glue you right after i stick it to ya...
See Spul spit flames.. but 'Catch Hell' like the Devil pitching to ya!
Same as above but not as bad....3/10


hotshh!'s OVerall Verse: 31/80
Comments:
The first half of your verse was anus....and the few last lines were too....in between you done the best....just stop with the !!!! after the end of each line...it gets....gay...



Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL
They say a penny for each thought…I guess it ain’t no joke
If it’s tru I’ll have a nickel, for thinkin’ of my votes
Decent....4/10
I’ma make your ass jet, son, ain’t talkin’ bout “no show”
Cuz yo lines come more stretched, than Tyra Bank’s forehead, yo
No....looks familar to something else I've read....2/10
How you made it this far, to me… it’s still a mystery
I’ll close you like my Social Studies book, you’re history
Meh....ok...3/10
Your rhymes are never "hot", they never amount to "shit"
Yo name gets bigger and bigger, but then you forgot "it" (1)
Same as above....3/10
The kid couldn’t "check in" in this thread, he knos he’s dead
It’s ok, he’s got the “Chills”, he was told to stay in bed
Decent....4/10
21-4… good record, you got the “ills”, g!!!
Nah, you don’t got it, but you do when there’s a “P” (2)
Stop explaining your lines...4/10
They say yo name predicts yo skill, for you, that shit is tru
…It’s right on target, after this, you WILL be blue
Wtf?? 3/10
You never spit out hot, shit, man, don’t be silly
The only time you do, is when you’ve eaten too much chili
Played...3/10


SPuL's Overall Verse: 26/80
Comments:
You came played....and well.....I hate explanations to punches.....I have to read your line...then go down and see the gay ass explanation to get the punch...which makes it supremely weak...some of you lines didnt make sense...and you need work on wit....

Vote - hotshh!
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