heres a verse and tell me what you think of it its from my battle verse Nutz-B in my sig but heres a little verse

I’ll Re-write yer life with my punches and you’ll be the first to act-up…
After then you’ll need to go to the doctors office to get yer close-up/
Its yer first time to lose to me, cuz im a straight up hardcore emcee…
Out rule you fast ill get another “K.O” cuz yer verse sucks, well I disagree/
Ill turn yer life around from this point on you’ll be known as a handicap…
You will be walkin around like that cuz my verse was like a pimp-slap/
I hit bitches and stunt muthafuckas like you around the place…
Even everyone in “RV” says that yer bitch-ass is a disgrace/