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Old 02-01-05, 11:27 PM   #10
Magic5
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Voted For: Kamikazee

Kamikazee
structure is ok.. some of ur lines are stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the partial stretchness.. u had a few multis.. u attempted wordplay, but some of it didnt connected.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. u had one attempted personal..

Judicial
structure was good.. flow was on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it was all garbage.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Judicial had the better structure and flow.. neither had good personals.. Kamikazee had more multis.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that, Kamikazee gets my vote..

VOTE - KAMIKAZEE