nice drop man, kinda scary lol but still a good drop. i only say scary causethe amount of emotion you brought to the verse had me thinkin at anytime you was about to kill someone. either the chick or her boyfriend lol. but this piece was very well worded. good to see u toned down the multies a bit, it allowed me to make a better connection wit ya verse instead of feeling like im listening to a papoose song. but yea i feel like you really let your emotion breath on this track. every line showed pain and anguish in and artistic way.

If happiness is wealth, then I guess this a humble welcome to poverty

dont even need to put the other line with it, that one line alone sums up the quality of the entire piece. a well worded emotional piece that grabs the reader. the only thing i could really critcise would be the lack of imagery, although this piece didnt really need it because it wouldve been completely overshadowed anyway.

a very good drop 8.5/10

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