vote mad dog, granted your punch was a tiny bit creative,but didnt understand the
"fluid on your brain" line,maybe its england slang?? but if you could of made that part of the punch harder wouldve been sick, but the overall concept was there..
and, LPMNDCTE,yours didnt even rhyme and really wasnt that sick

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