Voted For: A.K.A.

VIRTUE
structure is good.. flow fell off a little.. you had one multi.. the topic was ass, but u didnt do a very good job drawin it out.. you never even said the mom had died until the 15 years later part.. imagery wasnt very good.. not very much emotion at all.. and no twists make it more enjoyable..

A.K.A.
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is alright.. flow falls off a little.. u had one multi.. topic is still ass, but u took about in a pretty predictable way.. until the end.. that was a good twist and a good way to end it.. there wasnt very much imagery at all.. there was some emotion, especially at the end..

Overall
VIRTUE had the better structure.. both had one multi.. neither had very good imagery.. A.K.A. did a better job drawin the topic out, and he had more emotion.. so basing off of that.. A.K.A. gets my vote for a better verse.