*LE*
...hmm nice intro...what is wrong with your quality man? i cant feel the kicks or bass at all...guitar melody is nice...shakers are coo...drums straight...the bass sounds distorted but it reminds me of a beat box shit i heard before so it dont kill it for me...
whoa change up!!!...nice transitions...those cuts were nice...wow you did a lot with this one....

*verbal*
intro was coo... drums were straight...string melody is nice...cuts and breaks were nice... i wasnt feeling the kick all that much...nice little chorus mix in...

vote - LE he grabbed the concept a little better and he did quite a bit more with
his beat...both beats were nice though...LE please fix your quality though