yo, I was feelin' this one. I liked it. Good job.

The only thing bad about it was that the first two lines don't really rhyme. Well it might rhyme when you say it, but for me it don't. But other than that it's dope.

You had nice imagery and stuff. I loved the flow. it was really good. I mean, yo verse looks like a box. haha But yea, lyrics were nice, and really got me thinkin'. I was likin this one, yo. Tight stuff. Keep droppin' pc.

I give it a 9.4/10