Vote: Terse

even if u came at least par or average, i'ma still be chokin ya, dweeb
cuz ya verse's never moderate....sorta like Revoke in this league
but fuck pronounciations - i'ma crush u like a soulless rival
aint tryna moon u, but even wit an ass verse i'ma control the the tidal

^^^those 4 lines took it, nice original punches, bad ass wordplay n gd structure

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