...huh???
wtf with the intro???...
ur voice sounds funny...i didnt know that u started...
ur voice is heLLa soft=not a good mic presence
nice fLowthe purpose lines shouLda been re-thought and redone....didnt fLow weLL homie....
i like the beat...LMAO thats like my quaLity but better...
sound sorta different...voice is funny
the lyrics are sorta simple.....yeh simple...
it was aight, not a bad track at all...
keep recording and writing, elavating...
great try...up ur emotion..
straight subject sorta...parts coulda been left out ya know...
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*edit* i peeped rhyme shine...

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