ok bud. i appreciate u takin time to read it and judge it. but jeez i just turned 18.. ive only been listening to rap since i was 12 and the majority has been pac big nas and bone thugs. and they do rhyme... have u listened to the way immortal technique writes, or r.a. the rugged man, or nas, or keith murray, jedi mind tricks, kanye, common, or lupe??? they kinda have the same style but their writing is like 203203840293092382x better and theyve been doin it much longer than me. all i need is practice. shit dude. but w.e i dont care ima stick by the way i want. im stickin to the way i like it. listen to the song ALL IM HEARING by krayzie bone. hes saying that eveyrone is tryna be like some one else and doesnt come with their own stlye. im coin with my own style so im just doin wat i want and wat i like