word nice beat, shadowville yup. Your quality def sounds better, i dont know what you did but word it's coo. I'm feelin ya hook a lot man, very catchy but you should added some adlibs or gave it some coo ecko effect or somin. Your flow is pretty good man, most of it is on lock. But I'm havin troubles understand some the words you sayin in some parts of your verses, for the most part it's good but just a few lines you know. Maybe you flowin it a little to fast in them parts im not sure but just work that out next time. I'm def feelin this track probably your best I've heard yet man nice drop.

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