alright I liked this a lot..even though it seemed long as fuck...the whole transition from person to person made it go by quickly...imagery was really good...i could see everything that was happening...message was really dope...i liked the whole concept period...vocab was dope...flow seemed a bit off at times...but i could have been readin it wrong....regardless.....very nice piece

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