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Old 12-22-04, 05:41 PM   #8
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Originally Posted by Killah.Bwoy
dumpster lines Played

everything else koo

hey that speaker line was used by somene. not the same line but the concept. thats played too..




well since we are sharing........basically every punch including the apprentice one was played and worded badly...fucked up structure and absolutely no readible flow...the hotshh line played the viagra line worded bad and played the drug dealer line played..the sumo line if not played then weak...the ONLY thing i felt the need to compete with was the closer...good closer...other than that ......BLAH!!

and skriptz im confused r u in the voting council cuz i dont see u..if u are..i feel bad for round 3 if u think that verse was hot...cannabarz was wayyyy more competition