stanz,u dropped 2 simple here man.nothing stood out 2 me
it seemed like u was tryin 2 write a poem..its a topical
i dont kno where you were goin with this..but it wasent towards a win

derv,u had crazy wordplay .nice structure u stayed on topic
a couple things stuck out 2 me..unlike your opponent
i got u takein this fairly easy for an overall much harder drop
seemed like u attempted to atleast put some time and effort
into this

stanz dont get me wrong u didnt have a horrible drop
it jus showed that u jus keystyled and didnt take your time
a good winning topical takes time

v/derv

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