that may have been the weakest shit i ever heard
that whole verse was choppy and shit like a severed turd
ur rhymes are played out and a 5 yr old could be spittin that
seriously though hears some advice u should consider quittin rap

no hard feelins but see how more then one word rhymed that would help and u have to use rhymes bout ppl ur battlin not bout anything hopefully that will help u