SEVERE LYRICS SUCKS COCK!
dont listen to him dawg... I'd drop his ass in a battle like that...
but look...
you aint THAT bad... and DONT give up...

whenever you write a rap... put content in on it...
for instance... I'ma rag on Severe lyrics since hes a bitch
and wants to bully people under him... ( hes mad cause he cant
elevate, but you can)
just watch... learn, see what I Do...

aiyo,
you wanna talk shit, you better hope your tough,
cuz ima hit you in your chest so much that I fold you up,
until your spine collapses makin both your shoulders touch.
Severe is on my nuts like a squirrel sits on a fence...
This herb is clinging to me, like faggots after I spilled lubricant,
heres a secret dawg, "light travels faster than sound"...
thats why you "appeared to be bright until you opened your mouth"
what now...

that took me like 1 minute and 1/2 to do... it just comes with
practice and determination... plus having a topic helps usually.
read tutorials, read other battles and open mics... you'll see.
~Ashy~