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Pretty played topic, pretty basic rhyme & flow. Very basic vocabulary. Alright emotion & remotely boring imagery. Keep elevatin. Try to make your pieces a little longer, add some multi's or higher vocabulary. Multi's would be nice, they help the flow of a piece greatly. Anyway, I like this piece, but you could elevate greatly. Keep it comin.
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