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U need a lot of work on ur rhyming..try to incorporate more complex rhymes and words/ vocabulary...
try to stay away from rhyming the same word twice in a row unless it is done for effect...not just cus u have nothing else to rhyme it with...use spell check and orgainze ur work into lines...also u don't need to show us what words rhyme, we are all smart enough to figure that out by ourselves...
keep truckin' mate..
cheers
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