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Old 08-15-04, 11:40 PM   #21
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Voted For: Tha~Pro.DiGy

ok:
you both need to work on structure, but i know they were written to be spit so it actually flows better...
prodigy:nice punches and great wordplay, you had some good multies in ya verse too, i liked the opener, thought it was strong, and your verse continued to be strong throughout, it never fell off, i thought the mexican peso line was funny and the looney toons line,i think both were good but since i enjoyed reading prodigy's verse because of the powerfull punches ima have to give it to him, nice job on this........
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