lmao this is actually a very good piece.. i felt it hit very hard the whole way thru.. oddly enough the first two lines were my least favorite.. i feel when opening a poem.. the first cuplet should be the hardest hitting.. and it really didnt catch my attention especially how u said crimson twice in one cuplet.. but i read the whole way thru.. and it picked up.. and its probably the best piece up right now.. good job..

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