pretty basic over all, vocabulary and complexity of the piece was dull and could've been a lil more colorful no real flip to the topic even tho how you expressed your words had little to do with the topic even if flip'd...asking why donj't you love me? and the reason being she's dead....isn't really an eye opener or shock i kinda picked up the body and ending of the piece rather quick. scheme was basic also....meh too short to really ellaborate could've been way better if executed right.

-XM

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