yo, honest vote, mofo,
-things to work on, mofo- work on harder punches, shorter lines, nad dont say fuck as much, oh and dont talk about people noone knows.
-frito- sorter lines, better punches, metas, biggerwords, and personals, try no to use played out lines either, try to make a better opener and closer too............ keep elvatin yo, not bad for a newbie tho