this better be like war, and it better crying

kicks and snares and hats sound nice, chopping sounds a bit sloppy, melody is still a bit stale, could have really spiced it up by layering a high note of a voice or piano hit over some parts, seems like a nice melody, but it isnt introduced and its kind of scattered and lost a bit in the chopping...did good by combining the hits and the melody, change @ 2:15 is pretty ill, should turn it up or layer something over it...not a bad beat here, keep bangin.