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Old 06-10-04, 10:20 AM   #2
Mikelaxx
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From: Ya Dnt Need 2 Know
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Whats this? iz it a love letter or your rappin?
you hopin' a bitch'll read it den sumfin will happen?
its good though, ina kind of love sick way
send it to a girl on a card, u mite win a heart, but boys think you gay
man, this shit is harsh, sounds like u got chucked
do u really love the girl or is she jus' someone u fucked
you's a boy you shouldnt be talkin this
cuz to other boys you be speakin bullshit
man it sounds like you got a real issue here
get yaself some x or get fucked on some beer
its clear u upset but we dont wanna know
all we wanna see iz ur lyrical flow
heres ya review you could be summet great
jus' dont let this girl wreck you man shes more than you can take
rap about anything just not love
all an all ur rap .. it aint dat good
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