ok king solo
overall was ok you went with all the bad vocab and shit to fit the piece which was pretty cool might have been a bit overdone but was ok
wasnt too creative really but i loved the ending also with the present day you messed up and reffered to things in past tense flow could be improved
overall 7/10

mentalz
To Abuse The Trueness And Assume It's Draught And Fruitless
..For Whats Not Common Taught Must Be Begot For Useless..
dope line

Like De' Jah Vu's Rue Refused To Imbue His Cortex, Persue His Core
Ignite His Flaws W/ The Promiss Of Knowledge Until He Asked For More
this line was good

ok i found that u had better flow in some parts some parts were like lines all on their own lol
lots of good multis thats ur like signature style
i feel that in some parts u forced some vocab a little overdone but not by much
you came more topical where as solos was liek om stuff
overall its pretty clkose but i think mentz got it because of his creativity

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