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Old 06-05-05, 07:01 PM   #8
PreZidict
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

v/ Dizzee...fuckin hard ass battle 2 vote on...4real

Propain
Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
4/5...punch was kinda weak but still nice delivery
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
2/5...wasnt too impressive...maybe its da wording
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
3/5...nice concept
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
5/5 liked da creativity on this line
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!
5/5...best line u had lmao funny shit

u had creativity...punches...some personals...structure needed a lil work otha than that tight verse altogetha

Dizzee Rascal
Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
5/5...whole 2 lines were tight as fuck
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all
5/5...liked da second line da best...creative
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
2/5...nah not ya best line fam
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed'
4/5...really liked dat shit...mad creative
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!
4/5...feed? nah but nice finisher...

creativity-Dizzee
punches-Propain
personals-Dizzee
metas-Dizzee
vocab-both

open-Dizzee (Pro's wasnt worded real good)
middle-Propain
close-Dizzee

Overall-Dizzee Rascal

mainly cause of da creativeness of his verse...both were creative as fuck but Dizzee's stood out a lil more...no landslide
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