honestly here it is,
it sucked,
it was to short,
it had no originality to it,
it was to basic,
but this was your first drop so it was at-most.... decent...

go to the cypher fourm and drop a couple of those freestyles,
this is where you actully have a song thats long enough to be concider a song not just a quick 4 bars

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