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Old 06-09-07, 01:07 AM   #11
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Wow, another surprise.


Lay-Nothin near as good as you dropped in 1-2 this week. But ok. Your
verse wasn't that great, but a few punches there. I liked some of your
concepts in this one, i think you finally followed through with 1 or 2 bars
that were fresh. The rest were ok, nothin really harsh. I think you could
have done better against him, and i happen to know that your one of the
better writers as far as punctuation and wording. In this one you kind of,
slacked in that area. Stay on point.

G-Damn dude, this shit definately didn't work out for you. LOL, i'm sure on
the mic it sounded straight i guess. but reading it in a text battle, i don't
think you did so hot. Your flow throughout the whole verse kept changing.
You had ok multis but they didn't even connect with each other. I don't feel
you threw punches at him. I think it was just a simple key that was weak.
Definately not the way to defend a 3-0 record.


V/Lay. One sided battle.
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